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2019年5月4日雅思考試-寫作精析
2019.8.27

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胖噠出國留學教育發布時間:05-0601:02關注Predict Daily胖噠今天將同大家一起分析下5月4日的雅思大作文,各位烤鴨寶寶們仔細看好哦!01題目The increasing use of technology in the workplace has made it easier for young people to find jobs and harder for older people to do so. To what extent do you agree or disagree?02題目翻譯隨時科技在工作中的廣泛運用,這使得年輕人比老年人更容易找到工作。你在多大程度上同意或是不同意這個觀點?03輕松破題本題是由科技類、工作類和家庭類三個話題綜合構成的題目,題目以科技為引子,以找工作為目的,形成了以年輕人和老年人之間的比較關系。是典型的多維度的雅思作文題,其實拿到此題有兩種解題思路。一:通過此題的科技類聯系到常見科技利弊題,諸如相似題目的1和2,對于科技類的題目處理時,常常按照不同年齡群體分類來決定利弊對象。二:從此題兩個主題出發,科技導致老年人就業難,那么這個因果關系是否能成立?老年人是否能適應社會的發展,適應科技在工作中的應用性。有相似題目題目如下:1. Some people think the technology makes life complex, so we should make life simpler without using the technology. Do you agree or disagree?(2017年2月18日)2. Some groups of people beneficial from modern communications technology,but some of them think they are not beneficial from these.To what extent do you agree or disagree?(2017年8月12日)3. Nowadays more and more older people who are looking for work have to compete with younger people for the same jobs.04全文綱要首先這篇文章我們可以采用四段式開頭段:背景句+話題引出+亮出觀點正文段一:年輕人比老年人更易就業的原因(同意部分)正文段二:老年人并不比年輕人難就業的原因(不同意部分)結尾段:觀點+總結至少一個論點PS:若論點過多也可展開多個段落05核心論點年輕人比老年人更易就業的原因(同意部分)1. 年輕人在運用技術方面更加嫻熟,反之老年人適應很困難老年人并不比年輕人難就業的原因1. 有足夠機會,老年人也可適應科技的在工作中的運用2. 老年人能夠將他們在技術上學到的知識與在現實生活中豐富的溝通技巧結合起來06高分范文These days, young people seem to find it easier to get employed than the older ones. One possible reason why this happens is that young workers are mostly “tech-smarter” than their older counterparts. This notion does make sense because sometimes the older persons just cannot “do” technology: not being able to figure out how to use a smart-phone or send email, for example. Since the age factor matters in the workplace that particularly stresses the use of technology, job applicants in their 20s are preferred for being “digital natives” and those in their 30s are acceptable for being “tech-savvy.” Nevertheless, those in their 40s are seldom tolerated, not to mention those in their 50s or older who are likely to have trouble adapting to new tricks.However, it does not necessarily mean that the young are always in a better position to find a job simply because they better at new technologies.過渡句的使用 Many older people can actually get used to using technology skills if they are given the opportunity to do so. More over, according to a survey, workers aged 40 and up are among the most engaged members of the workforce, even though most of them would learn less, remember less, and take longer to master technology skills than do most younger workers. The same survey has also revealed that many employed older people are able to combine what they have learned in technology with seasoned communication skills in real life. Therefore, it should come as no surprise that the average age of an outstanding entrepreneur is 45, not 25, and there are more top-ranking managers over 50 than 35.To sum up, conventional thinking assumes that older job-seekers are relatively not as “tech-savvy” as younger ones. To my mind, however, tech” and “old” are not opposites, and there are far more factors than techology skills to consider in the decision of the employers.(標紅為核心論點)07高分句子獨家解析1. One possible reason why this happens is that young workers are mostly “tech-smarter” than their older counterparts. 胖噠解析:one possible reason why...后接定語從句;is that...后接表語從句;mostly意為一般地,通常;tech-smarter than older counterparts此處為比較級的使用;counterparts意為相當的人,對應的事物。2. However, it does not necessarily mean that the young are always in a better position to find a job simply because they better at new technologies.胖噠解析:necessarily意為必然地、不可避免地;mean that...后接賓語從句;be in a better position to do sth意為在做某事方面有更好的優勢; because后接原因狀語從句。3. More over, according to a survey, workers aged 40 and up are among the most engaged members of the workforce, even though most of them would learn less, remember less, and take longer to master technology skills than do most younger workers.胖噠解析:according to意為根據,有同義詞如:in term of 、based on和in light of;aged 40 and up常用于雅思小作文中,是年齡段的常見用法之一;engaged為過去分詞作形容詞的用法;even though意為盡管,引導讓步狀語從句;master technology skills意為掌握技術技能,注意動詞的搭配。4. The same survey has also revealed that many employed older people are able to combine what they have learned in technology with seasoned communication skills in real life.胖噠解析:has also revealed that...此處reveal意為揭示,且后接賓語從句;employed同為過去分詞作形容詞的用法,此處為前置定語。Combine what they have learned in technology with...此處用法為:combine sth with sth08給句子添油加醋兩種常見強調句式,It is...that或者it is...who。表達出類似中文的“正是......導致了......”的意思。參考案例Although friends definitely play a significant role in shaping teenagers personality, it is the parents and siblings that have a far greater impact on the development of their personality traits.09工作類-老齡化類語料補充job fair 招聘會online application 網申campus recruiting 校園招聘internal recruiting 內部招聘headhunting 獵頭受雇者employee聘用某人hire some one簽約雇用某人 sign some one up從事自由業的 self-employed自己做生意run ones own business遞交辭呈hand in one’s resignation解雇某人dismiss someoneattend to照顧be devoid of gratitude忘恩負義drive off loneliness驅除孤獨emotional support精神上的支持care and comfort關心愛護beadhouse養老院inane空虛的live out ones life in retirement退休安度晚年old age boom高齡化高峰old and infirm老弱病殘的

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